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According to the statistics of Word Health Organization showed more than one million of people
killed and twenty to fifty ten millions of people hurt by unsafe driving (WHO). The damage of traffic
accident to the family and their whole life cannot image because the destructive accident could make their
family from happiness to full of melancholy. The two main reasons of traffic accident are alcohol and
Although it is illegal to drive car after drinking, there are too many people still ignore the law for
convenience. Because some area, especially in the suburbs, the traffic police system is loose and people
are lack of the awareness of traffic laws, it gives the chance of necessity knows no law to people. In order
to reduce the rate of drunk driving, the organization named MADD (Mothers Against Drunk Driving) and
SADD (Student Against Destructive Decision) regularly hold some events to spread the influence of
drunk driving to people, especially for teenagers. On their website, the number of people who died
because of drunk driving posted on the first page, which is marked for catching peoples attention.
In addition, calling and texting massage on the road is also the most dangerous behavior. The
effect of Posting billboard is slight since they think it only takes them one to two minutes to answer the
phone or text message. However; too many traffic accidents happened in the uncertain factors. If driving a
car on the open road and no cars and people on the road, there is message remind on the phone. Because
the road is clear, it seems no problem to text massage. In this situation, a girl rushes out from the
apartment to the road in front of the car about 200 meters. It is too late to stop the car when you after
texting because it needs time to react in these emergent situation, specially, when you have not focused on
The probably most effective method is to install auto answer machine on cars. It is not expansive
and effective way to stop people answering their phone calls. When driver received a message or a call,
the machine will directly answer it, like sorry, I am driving so I cannot respond you but I will call back
as soon as possible. Thank you. Calls and messages will not display on the phone when people drive car.
However, car engineers are willing to spend more time on building developing blue tooth system, which
is easy for driver to answer the phone calls. Nevertheless, the technology is higher than before, the root of
question has not solved yet. The problem is not the car but human because answering the phone call also
interfere people to drive car like normally. The only way to solve the problem is to cut the relationship
between phone and people on the road. Engineers are trying to invent auto driving car, which just need
driver to set the destination and then do your own business. It is so dangerous because there are too many
uncertain factors could happen on the road like road closed, a new fork in a road and some emergent
Thus, in the auto driving immature age, driving car still need people to pay all the attention on the
road. It is unnecessary to spend time on texting or calling on the road because the damage of traffic
accident cannot image. Therefor; driving safety is not only good for you, but also for others.
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